it is clear what will happen in the advert because it is stated for example the boy will use a computer to play video games and then the parents use broadband to see what the child is doing.
there is no key message in this advert. The treatment is fully linked to the brief because she has used quotes from the brief for example what the government wants you to do. the audience is not clearly stated in this treatment could be explained as age gender and interests. This treatment has not used the correct terminology of conventions. for example the slogan and tag-line.
This could be improved by having an idea of the audience and a slogan for the advert to people can remember it.
it is clear what will happen in the advert because it is stated for example the boy will use a computer to play video games and then the parents use broadband to see what the child is doing.
ReplyDeletethere is no key message in this advert.
The treatment is fully linked to the brief because she has used quotes from the brief for example what the government wants you to do. the audience is not clearly stated in this treatment could be explained as age gender and interests.
This treatment has not used the correct terminology of conventions. for example the slogan and tag-line.
This could be improved by having an idea of the audience and a slogan for the advert to people can remember it.