Monday, 12 October 2009

Action plan 2

5 things i need to improve at:
  1. work faster and get my work recorded on time.
  2. make sure the sound on my work is clear.
  3. use a wider range of shots.
  4. be a bit more creative
  5. try to make some of the shots longer

Focus group feedback

I was told that for my camera the strengths were:
  • good camera movement
  • nice shots
  • good framing
  • clear shots
and the weaknesses were:
  • should have made some of the shots longer
  • used too many of the same shots
For my editing my strengths were:
  • eye catching and the audience would like it
  • nice graphics
  • neat and clear editing
and the weaknesses were:
  • i needed more graphics
  • the graphics needed to be more colourful and bright
My weakness for sound was:
  • the sound quality wasn't very good, the voices should have been louder than the background noise.
The strengths for my creativity were:
  • good reaction of the actors
  • good idea
  • good acting
and the weaknesses were:
  • it didnt look realistic
  • simple
  • it could have had more people
  • it could have had more props

Monday, 5 October 2009